教你寫高分英語作文的書面表達之文字提綱式4.【2015·廣東】

　　基礎寫作(共1小題，滿分15分)

　　你接受了一項寫作任務，為英語校報寫一篇科技報道。

　　[寫作內容]

　　請根據以下信息，介紹國外醫療行業出現的一項新技術。內容包括：

　　*唾液樣本：saliva sample

　　[寫作要求]

　　只能用5個句子表達全部內容;

　　[評分標準]

　　句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章連貫。

　　【答案】

　　第一節DNA Detection

　　Wecan use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predictwhether people are particular about food and remind people to take properexercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks tofinish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen ourbodies. It may cause too many worries.

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：對于基礎寫作用5個句子概括醫療新技術，要求必須用上所有的要點，不能遺漏。對于概括短文大意，要抓住要點。敘述自己的班級情況時：1.仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息。2.根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態;就本文而言應該用一般現在時態及一般將來時。 3.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

　　【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如Iwill explain to them that studying hard is very important運用了賓語從句，以及Sallywas a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定語從句。副詞Therefore的使用使文章內容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。

　　【考點定位】考查提綱作文。

　　【名師點睛】本題所給用5個句子概括醫療新技術的材料是學生不太熟悉的內容，所以要盡量使用學生熟悉的句式來寫，還必須用5個句子表達所有的信息。此題主要考查閱讀概括能力及語言的組織的能力。需要用一些高級句式及詞匯來增加文章的亮點。

　　教你寫高分英語作文的書面表達之文字提綱式5.【2015·陜西】

　　書面表達(滿分30分)

　　假定你是李華。在校報英語專欄看到了學校“英語文化節”的一則招募啟事，請閱讀啟事，并根據寫作要點和寫作要求寫一封應征郵件。

　　Volunteers Wanted

　　Our annual English Festival, which will beheld on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provideservice for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you areinterested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience toMs.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.

　　寫作要點：

　　1.表示寫信意圖;

　　2.陳述應征目的;

　　3.說明應征條件(性格、能力等)。

　　寫作要求：

　　1.郵件詞數不少于100;

　　2.開頭和結尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數;

　　3.可根據情況增加細節，使行文連貫

　　4.不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。

　　Dear MS Chen ,

　　I’mLi Hua, astudent from Class2, Grade 3. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Looking forwardto your reply.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【參考答案】

　　Dear MS Chen ,

　　I’m Li Hua, astudent from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as astudent volunteer.

　　Ireally want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering myservice, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communicationskills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

　　Asan outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such agood command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activitiesof my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.

　　Iam sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefullif you could give me a kind consideration.

　　Looking forwardto your reply.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于英文書信，根據提示可知需要結合“英語文化節”的一則招募啟事寫一封應征郵件。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀招募啟事，弄清招募職位所有信息和要求;2、根據寫作要點從三個方面寫應征郵件。寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫。3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態;就本文而言應該用一般現在時態。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

　　【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如I have such agood command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.運用了so…that…句型，以及定語從句I have lent a helping hand to her in severalEnglish activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachersand classmates.。此外，文章還使用了大量短語，如applyfor the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,,have such a goodcommand of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入語Besides，以及副詞Successfully的使用使文章內容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。

　　【考點定位】考查提綱作文

　　【名師點睛】這篇作文類似于讀寫類作文。首先要讀懂招募啟事，抓住重要信息。再結合提綱寫作。內容貼近學生的生活，學生有話講。也富有實用性。對學生的交際能力也會有所幫助。

　　教你寫高分英語作文的書面表達之文字提綱式6.【2015·四川】

　　第三節 書面表達(共35分)

　　71.假如你是李夏。你看到美國留學生Sharon 在網上發貼，.希望有人能幫助她提高普通話(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英語作為回報。請根據以下提示用英語給她寫一封電子郵件。

　　1.表達給她提供幫助的意愿;

　　2.說明你能勝任輔導的理由;

　　3.給出講好普通話的兩點建議;

　　4.提出你學習英語的具體需求。

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數120左右，開頭語已為你寫好;

　　2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;

　　3. 文中不得透漏個人姓名和學校名稱;

　　HiSharon,

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post thatyou want to improve yourMandarm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考答案】

　　Hi Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improveyour Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As astudent, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I amChinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in mydaily life. So I’m quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin.

　　Learning Mandarin takes time, so if youwant to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday.As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read somebooks in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chineseradio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a languagelearning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

　　In your post, you say you can teach Englishas a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, ifyou allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve myEnglish.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour inEnglish and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

　　Hope for you early reply!

　　Yours Sincerely

　　Li Xia

　　【亮點說明】本文要點齊全，結構完整。使用多種句式，如定語從句：I amChinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in mydaily life.、表語從句：It is just what I want.等。還使用了大量短語等。

　　【考點定位】考查提綱類作文

　　【名師點睛】書面表達考查大家所熟悉的提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

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