在作文寫作中，一件事情的發生，離不開時間、地點、人物、事情的起因、經過和結果這六方面，即常說的“六要素”，只有交待清楚這幾方面，才能使讀者對所敘述的事，有個清楚、全面的了解。

　　心理學告訴我們，興趣是獲得知識、形成技能技巧、開發智力的動力。因此，任何形式的教學都必須嚴格遵循興趣性原則。只有當學生對寫作文產生了濃厚的興趣時，快速作文訓練才會有成效。

　　今天小編要與大家分享的是：小升初滿分作文：奉獻與享受，具體內容如下，僅供閱讀參考。

　　奉獻與享受

　　讀了巴金爺爺寫的信后，我沉思了很久。同樣的都是人，為什么我還沒能明白生命的意義?為什么我還示能讓自己的生命開花結果?我終于尋思出了答案，那就是我沒有努力過，沒去嘗試過。

　　巴金爺爺說：“我終于明白生命的意義在于奉獻而不在于享受。”我可以體會到巴金爺爺為了明白這句話付出了多少的努力，在這背后又有多少心酸。他寫的文章里，簡直就把自己寫進去了，他談論自己的親歷的事，和我們一起分享著巴金爺爺的親身事跡。

　　我敬佩他，喜歡他，他為我們偉大的祖國作出了多少貢獻。他對我們的祖國有無限的愛，他為我們做出了一個好榜樣。

　　我一定要為我們的班級、社會、祖國爭光，讓我們的老師、父母永遠以我為傲。

　　我以前總是把那些名人看的是多么!可是他們就算在再高的地位上，也還是比不過巴金爺爺，因為他從來示炫耀自己，也不在乎自己是不是什么杰出人物，他只是把對祖國的感情用作品來。在我眼晨，巴金爺爺就是一位“杰出人物”，和巴金爺爺一樣，我說的“杰出”并不是他有才華，而是他明白生命的意義，明白怎樣使生命開花結果!如果是我們，我們能知道嗎?在現實生活中，我們只能在家里做小皇帝，小公主，讓家人伺候我們，我們有沒有對自己生活的幾年的家做一點貢獻呢?沒有，我們是在享受。我們只能坐在教室做作業，做好作業就出去玩，誰能知道在這同年風風雨雨的日子里，是誰最后一個離開教室呢?是老師。就算我們主動掃一下地，讓老師歇一會兒，也好!可是，我們做了嗎?當我們在快樂的玩耍時，誰又能想到已經疲憊不堪的老師呢?又是誰 能留意 老師的頭上又多了幾根銀發呢?沒有，我們只會給老師添麻煩，讓本來事情就多的老師添加了一些煩惱。難道，我們就不會覺得愧對于父母，愧對 于 老師嗎?

　　英文翻譯

　　Dedication and enjoyment

　　Ba Jin grandfather read the letter written, I thought for a long time. The same is, why I have not been able to understand the meaning of life? Why do I have shown to make their own lives to fruition? I finally wondered out the answer, that I have not tried, not to try too.

　　Grandpa Ba Jin said: "I finally understand the meaning of life lies in the dedication rather than to enjoy." I can appreciate the Ba Jin's grandfather in order to understand how much to pay this statement of effort behind this and how much sad. He wrote the article, simply go to put himself wrote, he talked about his own personal experiences of the thing, and together we share personal stories Grandpa Ba Jin.

　　I admire him, and like him, he made a number of contributions to our great motherland. He told us of the motherland infinite love, he made us a good example.

　　I have to for our class, social, motherland glory, let our teachers, parents always be proud of me.

　　I used to always look at how those celebrities! But they are even on another high position, but also better than Grandpa Ba Jin, however, because he never shows to show off, do not care what he is not worthy, he just put the motherland feelings come with work. In my eyes the morning, Grandpa Ba Jin is an "outstanding figure", and Grandpa Ba Jin, I say "outstanding" is not he talented, but he understands the meaning of life, to understand how to make life fruition! If we We can know? In real life, we can only do little emperor, little princess at home, your family and serve us, we have no life of their own home a few years make some contribution to it? No, we are enjoying . We can only sit in the classroom homework, do the job and went out to play, who knows in this same year of ups and downs of the day, who was the last to leave the classroom? Yes teacher. Even if we take the initiative to sweep the ground, let the teacher break for a while, Fine! But we do it? When we are happy to play, who would have thought already exhausted teacher? Who is watching the teacher's head the addition of a few silver-haired it? No, we only give the teacher trouble, make things more teachers have been added so