高考英語寫作滿分范文一

　　注意：

　　1.詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

　　Dear Peter,

　　Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show.

　　The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

　　Hope to hear from you soon.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【名師點(diǎn)睛】

　　本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)充合情合理，符合生活實(shí)際。建議對方參加本次展覽的理由符合邏輯：對方恰好有這一主題的作品。全文句式多樣化，并沒有一直使用陳述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀請函的特點(diǎn)。

　　文章中使用了較多的復(fù)合句，如定語從句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate，時(shí)間狀語從句the last time you visited our school，條件狀語從句If you want to join等。全文沒有中國式英語句式，體現(xiàn)出很高的駕馭英語的能力。

　　考點(diǎn)：考查半開放作文

　　高考英語寫作滿分范文二

　　假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個(gè)人簡歷(resume)。給外教MS Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。

　　【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

　　Dear MS Jenkins,

　　I’m Li Hua. I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials and format.

　　I would much appreciate it if you could do me a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英語寫作滿分范文三

　　假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

　　1.表示歉意;

　　2.說明原因;

　　3.另約時(shí)間。

　　注意：

　　1.詞數(shù)100左右;

　　2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】

　　Dear Bob,

　　I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

　　Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

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