歷年高考英語滿分作文范文一

　　【全國卷I海南、寧夏】

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華，正在英國接受英語培訓，住在一戶英國人家里。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你準備外出，請給Mrs. Wilson 寫一留言條，內容包括：

　　1.外出購物

　　2.替房東還書

　　3.Tracy 來電話留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消

　　2)此事已告知Susan

　　3) 盡快回電

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數100左右;

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Mrs. Wilson,

　　I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文屬于提綱式要點作文，是學生比較熟悉的題材，體現了英語學習應該注意實用性，生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態運用恰當、準確，各個要點間邏輯連貫，行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯，而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句，因此要仔細組織語言，合理安排結構。在語言方面，要特別注意簡潔明了，開頭要開門見山。

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　　情景作文

　　假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區植樹，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

　　注意：詞數不少于60

　　提示詞：郊區 suburbs

　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

　　【名師點評】

　　本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環保結合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。

　　【北京卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　開放作文

　　請根據下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于50

　　In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

　　What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

　　【名師點評】

　　本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內容，發散表達。考生重點要看出這個人是卷發高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。

　　【江蘇卷】

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　　鼠標是計算機時代最佳的人機交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計算機操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標的習慣也會帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標為切入點，根據下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　鼠標的必要性對多數人來說，操作計算機，上網沖浪……

　　鼠標的便捷性點擊、移動、插入、拷貝、刪除……編輯文本，搜索信息……

　　收發郵件，選購商品……

　　點播音樂，下載電影……

　　如果過分依賴鼠標…… (請考生結合自身感受，列舉兩到三點)

　　注意：

　　1.對所給要點逐一陳述，適當發揮，不要簡單翻譯。

　　2.詞數150左右。開頭已經寫好，不計人總詞數。

　　3.作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

　　The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

　　For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

　　A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

　　【名師點評】

　　本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內容與我們生活相關，考生只要把所給要點逐條陳述，適度發揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。文章說理清楚，語言流暢，句式表達多樣，用詞恰當、準確。不失為一篇滿分作文。

　　歷年高考英語滿分作文范文二

　　2012高考英語滿分作文(上海)

　　描述你在學校的一次午餐，具體要求如下：

　　詳細描述用餐的情況

　　簡要表述你對這次午餐的感受

　　這是一篇簡單卻需要挖掘的文章，因為如果只是描述用餐情況，顯然缺乏深度，夸夸其談，流于表面。學生拿到這樣的題目需要仔細考慮用餐背后的東西。比較容易想到的話題是食物浪費、用餐衛生、餐桌禮儀等。在創作范文中，筆者另辟蹊徑，通過大多數同齡人用餐時的匆忙來襯托“我”的悠然自得，凸顯出在緊張的高中學生生涯中，作者能夠留有一片心靈凈土，通過飲食來調節情緒，更好地面對挑戰，表現出樂觀的人生態度。此文結構簡單，文筆清新，語言精準，并運用了高中階段常見的語法結構，不失為一個很好的作文模板，供學生借鑒。

　　范文：

　　The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found

　　elsewhere.

　　The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)

　　一、語法解構

　　現在分詞作定語 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang

　　倒裝句

　　(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one

　　(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be

　　不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen

　　狀語從句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed.

　　在分詞作狀語 Waiting formy turnpatiently。

　　2012年高考英語作文：河北高考英語滿分作文

　　2012河北卷英語提綱：假如你是李華，假期參加了中美學生夏令營，對美國的中學生有了初步的了解，寫一篇英語小作文，字數120，描述你眼中美國中學生的生活

　　1.寬容心強

　　2.自己動手

　　3.擅長社交

　　4.標新立異。

　　參考范文：

　　Hi, this is li hua, in holiday I participated in the sino-us student summer camp, for American students have a further understanding, most American students go to school at eight o 'clock in the morning, they usually before school this time some sports, such as running, playing badminton, in their courses in school is very wide, and have dabbled in terms of Chinese history teacher special, it makes me very is proud that our country also really into the world, and the world also start to listen to China,afternoon when teachers often will take the students do some practice, because they think that practice is the best teacher. In the United States, teachers should pay more attention to student's character, they think that a person can learn bad, but must have good manner. In this camp, I recognize the sino-us differences, also more students to learn my firm, work for our country in the future, make the country stronger.

　　參考翻譯：

　　大家好，

　　我是李華，

　　在假期中我參加了中美學生夏令營，對于美國的中學生有了進一步的了解，美國的中學生早上大都八點去上學，他們通常會在上學前的這段時間做一些運動，例如跑步、打羽毛球等，在學校中他們的課程涉獵非常廣泛，并且有專門的老師來講中國歷史，這讓我很是自豪，我們的國家也真正融入了世界，世界也開始傾聽中國了，下午的時候老師們通常會帶學生們做一些實踐活動，因為他們認為實踐是最好的老師。在美國，老師們更加注重學生的品行，他們認為一個人可以學習不好，但一定要擁有良好的品行。在這次夏令營中，我認識到了中美學生的差異，也更讓我堅定要好好學習，將來報效祖國，使祖國更加強大。

　　四川2012年高考英語滿分作文

　　2012四川高考英語提綱：假如你是大學一年級新生李華。開學之初，你的英語老師MsLi希望了解每位同學的英語學習情況，并征求教學建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。

　　1、對英語學習的認識;

　　2、自己目前的英語水平;

　　3、自己英語學習存在的主要問題;

　　4、對英語教學的兩點建議。

　　作文地帶提示您注意：

　　1、詞數100左右;

　　2、信的開頭和結尾已給出。

　　Dear Ms Li,

　　I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher.Thank you!

　　Li Hua

　　One Possible Version:

　　Dear Ms Li,

　　I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher.

　　As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

　　My English is just OK and the two main problem in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

　　Thank you!

　　歷年高考英語滿分作文范文三

　　【全國卷I】

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　　假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內容應包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學歷 2.個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務

　　注意：詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteer

　　Dear Sir / Madam:

　　I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點評]

　　這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點，同時以“我”為中心，詳細說明了自己對志愿者工作的結合，以此來表達自己的決心。由于用詞恰當，這種表現就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運用也不錯。

　　【全國卷II】

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華。應英國朋友Bob的要求， 寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關信息。

　　注意：

　　1、字數100左右

　　2、可以適當增減細節，以使行文連貫

　　3、開頭語已為你寫好

　　Dear Bob,

　　Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.

　　There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.

　　Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文最大的特點是描繪仔細而生動，意思表達十分契合。文章以短句為主，兼以長句讀起來輕快。文章的體系結構也是常用的三段式，作者極力推薦自己的圖書館，這么好的圖書館怎么不打動他的外國朋友呢?

　　【安徽卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　假設你是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，剛回到國內。回國后，你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：

　　感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助

　　一本英語詞典忘記帶回

　　詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴

　　詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上

　　郵資自己付

　　注意：

　　1、詞數100左右;信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

　　2、可適當增加細節，使行文連貫

　　2、參考詞匯：郵資-postage

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.

　　However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .

　　Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.

　　I’m eager to receive your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應用文，那么文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還采用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。

　　【重慶卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　加拿大高中生David在互聯網Internet上登出啟事notice，希望結識一位中國朋友，以便學習中國的語言，文化culture。

　　假設你是李華，請在看到這則啟事后，用英文給David發一封電子郵件，主要內容包括：

　　你怎樣得知David的愿望

　　你愿意成為他的朋友

　　你打算如何幫助他

　　你盼望他的回復

　　注意：

　　1、電子郵件的格式已為你寫好

　　2、字數：100詞左右

　　3、在答題卡上作答

　　Dear David,

　　I’m a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe I’m your good choice.

　　China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.

　　There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. I’ll be looking forward to your reply. I’ll show you around our great China if you come to China.

　　Yours sincerely ,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文的語言非常流暢，我們可以看到，本文雖沒有華麗的辭藻，但是語言的組織和層次感很強。同時連詞的使用，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點突出，同時也起到了強調和吸引注意的目的。